说明：假设你是某跨国公司采购部经理王小俊，请根据以下信息拟一封给ABC公司销售部经理John Smith先生的信。
- 最近参观了今年的进出口博览会，看到了贵公司生产的电烫斗，希望进一步了解有关信息；
- 希望得到该产品的价目表和使用说明书；
- 请告知该产品所需的最小订购量，如订购20台是否有折扣，及售后服务等情况；
- 期待尽快收到以上的信息，并期待与对方长期合作。
采购部 Purchasing Department
进出口博览会 Import and Export Expo
电烫斗 the electric iron
折扣 discount
Recently, we have visited The Import and Export Expo of this year, and witnessing the releasing of the electric iron that your company produced. We hope we can obtain more information about it, since it can help(aid,assist) us a lot. For example, we hope that we can acquire the price tab and the user guide of the product. We also want to learn about the minimum numbers of the product. If we purchased twenty things, we want to know if there is any discounts and after-sales service. We expect these things mentioned is received normally, and hope we will stay cooperative in the future.
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We hope we can obtain more information about it, since it can help us a lot.
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We would like to obtain more information about the product.
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For example, we hope that we can get the price tab and the user guide of the product.
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For example, we would appreciate it if you could provide us with the price list and the user manual of the product.
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We also want to learn about the minum number of the product.
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We would also like to know the minimum order quantity required.
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If we purchased twenty things, we want to know if there is any discounts and after-servives.
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Please also inform us whether a discount is available for an order of 20 units and provide details of your after-sales service.
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We expect these things mentioned is recived normaly, and hope we will stay corparative in the future.
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We look forward to receiving the above information soon and hope to establish long-term cooperation with your company.
Mr. John Smith
Sales Manager
ABC Company
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to you in my capacity as the Purchasing Manager of our company. Recently, I visited this year’s Import and Export Expo and was impressed by the electric iron manufactured by your company. I would like to obtain further information regarding this product.
I would be grateful if you could send us the price list and the user manual of the electric iron. In addition, please advise us of the minimum order quantity required. We would also like to know whether a discount is available for an order of 20 units, as well as the details of your after-sales service.
We look forward to receiving the above information at your earliest convenience. We also hope to build a long-term business relationship with your company.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Xiaojun
Purchasing Manager
[Your Company Name]